Minneapolis Public Schools Superintendent Lisa Sayles-Adams’s dissertation, African American Women Principals: A Phenomenological Study to Explore Their Experiences in K-12 Leadership, should have never been approved by her doctoral committee at Minnesota State University/Mankato. The dissertation is a travesty of poor grammar, misspelled words, and poor execution of stated purpose and research approach. Natalie Rasmussen (dissertation adviser), Candace Raskin, and Efe Agbamu have much for which they must answer for having approved this abominably written dissertation.
In a dissertation
replete with misspelled and misused words, the word, tenet, is rendered as
“tenant” two times; presentation of the word that should be “rein” is
given as reign and, most brain-boggling of all, the pseudonym is misspelled as “Marica”
rather than “Marcia,” assigned by Sayles-Adams as one of the five interviewees
participating in this qualitative study; Sayles-Adams also once
renders another pseudonym, Gwendolyn, as “Gwendoly.”
Beyond
errors impermissible for a competently written, reviewed, and edited
dissertation, though, are substantive inadequacies of the Sayles-Adams
dissertation:
The
chapters focused on the “Background of the Problem,” “Review of the
Literature,” and “Methodology” cover half of the dissertation. These
chapters should have been much briefer, just enough to provide readers with an
overview of the literature pertinent to challenges of African American women in
positions of leadership and to establish the need for more data and information
concerning African American public school principals in particular.
Much of
Chapter II, “Review of the Literature” presents information on African American
history that is well-covered in a bevy of books (obviating the need for the
large number of citations that Sayles-Adams gives) and only tangentially
related to the immediate topic of focus: Sayles-Adams discusses the
specific role of African American women principals during the Jim Crow
era--- and how those roles and challenges changed in the post-Jim Crow
era--- lamentably sparsely.
Chapter
III, “Methodology,” could also have been much shorter, more concisely
discussing the value of qualitative research and oral collections, along with a
briefer explanation of Sayles-Adams’s own interview process. As to her
style of interview, Sayles-Adams should have explained why she opted for a
virtual rather than physically in-person interview (of the type that that I
have always utilized), which provides for more immediacy, nuance, and
assessment of visual information. Also, as I point
out in my
“Comments” in the articles of this document, Sayles-Adams fails to follow up
with questions the answers to which would have been enormously interesting in
understanding more thoroughly the experiences, motivations, and professional
goals of her interviewees.
These
failures in methodology as actually utilized results in very slim findings and
shallow discussion. Sayles-Adams gives appearance of using citations,
which should be used sparely if at all in the “Findings” and “Discussion”
chapters, to pad those already too short chapters. An enormous
opportunity is lost to discover more profoundly the experiences of African
American women principals. Sayles-Adams more often retreats into other
authors’ findings as revealed in the literature in referring to the impact of
race and gender on the women principals whom she herself interviewed, rather
than providing more engaging material from her own interviews, asking follow-up
questions, and thereby depending on her own original research to make a
substantial contribution to the literature on African American women leaders in
general and on African American women school principals specifically.
The
extraordinarily poor quality of Lisa Sayles-Adams’s dissertation makes all the
more intriguing the author’s taking the rarely used step of placing the
dissertation on “embargoed” status for many months and then taking the nearly
unprecedented step of withdrawing her dissertation from public view on the
Cornerstone digitalized format.
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The multiple
failings witnessed in the wretchedly researched and written dissertation of
Lisa Sayles-Adams presents in high relief the poor quality of most theses
written for the flimsy Ed. D. (Education Doctorate), the culpability of
education professors who approve such fare, and calls attention to the multiple
faults of education professors who inflict their anti-knowledge ideology and
intellectual frailty on all administrators and teachers who are so
knowledge-deficient and render such insubstantial curriculum to our students.
Thus does
the abominable dissertation written by Lisa Sayles-Adams microcosmically
represent multiple ills of the Minneapolis Public Schools particularly and public
education in the United States generally.
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